

My first sentence is" Saving a water drop today, you can earn an ocean in the future". but I thought it was not ok, so I bring it to check the grammar. Fianlly, I got this one.
The second poster, many people thought it was looked liked the advertisment, not the poster. Although, it was very difficult to pesuade my model, and did some effects i submit the first one.
What is your opinion?Plz give me some advices.